I know that you used some voice in your writing, but this is your blog and I think you could have put a little more of your personality in your writing. It was a lot of information(which isn't necessarily always bad.)
It was hard to find something wrong, but if I had to pick one thing you could improve on it would be to pick bigger font. It was okay, but I could barely read it. Other than that, great job!
I know that you used some voice in your writing, but this is your blog and I think you could have put a little more of your personality in your writing. It was a lot of information(which isn't necessarily always bad.)
ReplyDeleteYou should make the comment font bigger.
ReplyDeleteIt was hard to find something wrong, but if I had to pick one thing you could improve on it would be to pick bigger font. It was okay, but I could barely read it. Other than that, great job!
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